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Title: Beautiful
Rating: NC-17
Genre: PWP
Fandom: White Collar
Pairings: Peter/Neal
Word Count: 516
Warnings: Oral Sex, M/M
Spoilers:  None
Disclaimer: These characters belong to USA network; I have no illusions to the contrary.
Summary: Peter is not as classically good looking as Neal, but that doesn't mean he isn't gorgeous. Peter is doubtful, so Neal teaches him otherwise.


“Peter, you are so fucking beautiful.” Neal tells his forlorn looking partner, who is standing on the other side of their bedroom. The fact that there will be two people in their bed tonight instead of three probably didn’t help matters. Elizabeth would be back after the weekend was over and she told Neal to take care extra special care of their mutual lover.

“What? You really think so? That’s easy for you to say. You’re perfect. Just perfect. I don’t know what I ever did to deserve not one but two lovers who are just so gorgeous.”

Neal refuses to agree and he continues to argue his point. “That’s part of your charm. You don’t know how hot you are. And I find that really, really sexy.”

“Do you think you can convince me?  I might be able to find a way.”

“Oh?” Neal’s eyes light up as Peter walks towards him. “What do you have in mind?”

“I bet even your come is good looking.” Neal watches a slow smirk grow on the other man’s face as he continues, “If only there were a way for me to wear it.”

“Wait, what? Are you sure? I thought that I would be the one that takes care of you tonight, and now you’re asking me to come on your face?”

“Yes.  Please, yes. I will enjoy it. Trust me. I want you to cover me in your spunk.”

“Ok, ok, you don’t have to try that hard to convince me.”

Peter unbuttons Neal’s pants and pulls them down around his ankles. When he stands up, he places one hand on Neal’s chest and pushes him down on the bed in a sitting position. Peter keeps eye contact as he kneels in between Neal’s legs and puts his hands next to Neal’s hips.

Peter starts with a predatory lick of down Neal’s shaft and kisses his head. Peter then begins to suck on the tip of Neal’s cock. At a painfully slow pace, Peter incrementally takes Neal further into his mouth. Peter’s lips fall back to Neal’s head before he works to swallowing Neal’s cock. This is not a small feat because Neal’s cock is growing harder and larger by the second and Peter almost has trouble holding it in his mouth. He kneads Neal’s ass cheeks as he makes his final suck on Neal’s cock.

Peter can feel that Neal is getting close by the way Neal is gripping his hair. It’s not painful, but it sends the message of urgency loud and clear.  He removes his mouth from Neal’s cock completely and gives it two pumps before the come starts to leak over his hand. Peter smiles as he closes his eyes and feels the first spurt lands across his left cheek. The next one lands on his chin and starts to drip off of his face,  The third shot further covers his left cheek. After Neal’s dick is flaccid, Peter straddles Neal’s lap.

Peter is almost breathless but he is able to mumble. “So, how do I look?”

“Totally debauched.”

“But beautiful?”

“Always.”


Date: 2010-12-28 05:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashfanatic22.livejournal.com
This was so yummy! and damn HOT! Neal trying to convince Peter he's hot (and he totally is) was adorable! Great Job! :D

Date: 2010-12-28 05:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
Wow you commented fast. Thank you. And yes Peter is damn attractive.

Date: 2010-12-28 06:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ckll.livejournal.com
HOT and cute if i can say that for a slash fic but it really was :D

Date: 2010-12-28 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting.
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Date: 2010-12-28 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
Sorry bout that. While you were busy I drafted the people in chat to help me finish it. I am glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-12-28 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afiawri.livejournal.com
The idea of Peter having Neal come on his face is totally hot! And of course, the dialogue at the end complements that so well. :)

Date: 2010-12-28 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
I agree, it is such a nice mental picture to imagine. I tried to mirror the dialogue in the end with the dialogue in the beginning so I am glad that came (lol) across. Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2010-12-31 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] littleboycalico.livejournal.com
A;KDFJAK;DSFJA;SKDFJA; OMG. Aww for Peter being clueless about how handsome he is and HHHHHHNNNNNNGGGGGG for the pron!! Great work, bb! <3

Date: 2010-12-31 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
Thank you Calico!

Date: 2011-01-03 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] medea-fic.livejournal.com
LOVE THIS STILL. As I said in chat, so freaking hot, and I love the idea that Peter is made ten times hotter in his own mind with Neal's come on his face. Yes. Dear God, yes.

Date: 2011-01-03 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] medea-fic.livejournal.com
Oh, also, I'm up to ep 6 in WC - didn't get quite as much time over the holidays to watch it as I thought I would, but I'm going on a bender this week. :)

Date: 2011-01-03 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
You read it in chat and you still commented anyway! I am glad this fic made sense, I wasn't sure it did. And if you like it, I know it's good. Yay for you watching more episodes. Can't wait to hear about it in chat.

Date: 2011-01-04 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] therumjournals.livejournal.com
THIS FIC IS HOT!!!! i've never even seen this show, but you can never go wrong with coming on the face. that's my motto!

Date: 2011-01-04 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
YOU CAN NOT POST ON MY JOURNAL. IT SCARES ME.

****RUNS***
***HIDES***
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(but thanks for commenting.)

Date: 2011-06-20 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippin004.livejournal.com
I applaud your ability to make this pairing adorable and hot at the same time. Seriously, you are a master.

Date: 2011-06-20 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monkeyonthelam.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. I seem to be able to make most anything fluffy, even messy blow jobs. Maybe it's my superpower.

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